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Albo, Minns, Greg Norman: The who’s who of grand final VIPs

WAtoday John Buckley
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  • the headline was changed: Albo, Minns, the new US ambassador: Greg Norman: The who’s who of grand final VIPs

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Donald Trump’s newly minted ambassador to Australia got a speed-run on local diplomacy in the presidents suite at Accor Stadium, joined by politicians and business leaders.

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  • WAtoday Albo, Minns, Greg Norman: The who’s who of grand final VIPs plain
  • The Age Albo, Minns, the new US ambassador: The who’s who of grand final VIPs plain

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The Age Albo, Minns, the new US ambassador: The who’s who of grand final VIPs Niral 4.1 · calm political 0 The Sydney Morning Herald Albo, Minns, Greg Norman: The who’s who of grand final VIPs Niral 4.1 · calm political 0 Brisbane Times Albo, Minns, the new US ambassador: The who’s who of grand final VIPs Niral 4.1 · calm political 0