The West AustralianAn explosives-laden vehicle has rammed into a mosque near a police facility in northwestern Pakistan, killing at least 15 people and wounding dozens more.
Attack on mosque in Pakistan kills at least 16
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Attack on mosque in Pakistan kills at least
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From the report
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How outlets headlined it
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- The West Australian Attack on mosque in Pakistan kills at least 16 plain
- The West Australian Pakistan mosque bombing near police office kills 21 plain
- ABC News Bomb attack at Pakistan mosque kills at least 21 people plain
How each outlet filed it
Also covered by The West Australian. We hold only their summary of it, not the report, so there is nothing of theirs to measure here.
| Outlet | Niral Score | Adjectives | Sourcing | Sentiment | Happiness |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| The West Australianas they published this story | 8.3 | 1 | 42 | -0.1 | 43.9 |
| ABC News | 15.7 | 10 | 49 | -1.2 | 11.8 |
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