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A pub trip with another man: court views CCTV footage of Jesse Baird found on Beau Lamarre-Condon’s devicesLamarre-Condon sized up surfboard bag against friend before allegedly murdering Sydney couple, court told
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Beau Lamarre-Condon sized up surfboard bag against friend before allegedly murdering Sydney couple, A pub trip with another man: court toldviews CCTV footage of Jesse Baird found on Beau Lamarre-Condon’s devices
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Former NSW police officer has pleaded not guilty to murdering Jesse Baird and Luke Davies before concealing bodies in bags bought from sports store.
Lamarre-Condon has been accused of fatally shooting Sydney couple Jesse Baird, 26, and Luke Davies, 29, with his police service weapon at Baird’s Paddington home on 19 February 2024.
During the prosecution’s openings on Monday, crown prosecutor Brett Hatfield SC alleged Lamarre-Condon asked his friend whether he would fit in the bag.
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Former NSW police officer has pleaded not guilty to murdering Jesse Baird and Luke Davies before concealing bodies in bags bought from sports store.
Beau Lamarre-Condon was seen sizing up a surfboard bag used to dispose of a victim days before the police officer murdered two men, prosectors have alleged in a Sydney court, where CCTV footage was shown to the jury.
Lamarre-Condon has been accused of fatally shooting Sydney couple Jesse Baird, 26, and Luke Davies, 29, with his police service weapon at Baird’s Paddington home on 19 February 2024.
CCTV footage taken from Miranda Westfield on 17 February was played to the NSW supreme court trial on Thursday showing Lamarre-Condon’s movements two days before the alleged murders.
In the compilation, Lamarre-Condon’s grey Tesla is seen passing by the shopping centre before the police officer and a friend enter a Decathlon store.
During the prosecution’s openings on Monday, crown prosecutor Brett Hatfield SC alleged Lamarre-Condon asked his friend whether he would fit in the bag.
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