The 20-year-old has attempted to maintain his lofty heights in the cauldron of finals football, with uncharacteristic errors and double guessing proving costly in recent weeks.
Confidence missing: Murphy Reid urged to watch himself ahead of big dance
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The 20-year-old has tried to maintain his lofty heights in the cauldron of finals football, with uncharacteristic errors and double guessing proving costly in recent weeks.
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- WAtoday Confidence missing: Murphy Reid urged to watch himself ahead of big dance plain
- The West Australian Confidence missing: Murphy Reid told to watch himself plain
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| Outlet | Niral Score |
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| WAtodayas they published this story | 17.5 |
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