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Confidence missing: Murphy Reid urged to watch himself ahead of big dance

Brisbane Times
Summary
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The 20-year-old has tried to maintain his lofty heights in the cauldron of finals football, with uncharacteristic errors and double guessing proving costly in recent weeks.

The report’s most important sentence, shortened and in plain words. How

The 20-year-old has attempted to maintain his lofty heights in the cauldron of finals football, with uncharacteristic errors and double guessing proving costly in recent weeks.

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  • Brisbane Times Confidence missing: Murphy Reid urged to watch himself ahead of big dance plain
  • The West Australian Confidence missing: Murphy Reid told to watch himself plain

How this outlet filed it, and how we rewrote it

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Also covered by The West Australian, WAtoday, The Age, The Sydney Morning Herald. We hold only their summary of it, not the report, so there is nothing of theirs to measure here.

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Brisbane Timesas they published this story 17.5

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