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Dynasties and destinies swing on Cleary's ankle injury

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  • Mark the 35th minute of Sunday's NRL preliminary final as the hinge on which a storied dynasty and a potential premiership destiny swung.
  • The Knights faithful turned Stadium Australia into a little piece of the Hunter, proving yet again they would follow their team into hell itself if Sid Fogg's would charter a bus there.
  • The Penrith half of the crowd rose for Blaize Talagi's score off a clever Jack Cogger kick, but never has Nathan Cleary, benched before kick-off, copped such treatment on his home turf as he did before he entered the game in the 20th minute.
  • In the end, it was the Knights who pushed the Panthers over the side to write their names in history, with a 22-14 win that sends Newcastle to their first grand final in 25 years.
  • The Panthers missed Cleary, their edges blunted, but Casey McLean came close to scoring.

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The Penrith half of the crowd rose for Blaize Talagi's score off a clever Jack Cogger kick, but never has Nathan Cleary, benched before kick-off.

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Headline as published: Dynasties and destinies swing on Cleary's horror ankle injury

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Mark the 35th minute of Sunday's NRL preliminary final as the hinge on which a storied dynasty and a potential premiership destiny swung.

Penrith and Newcastle had fought a first-half that made both look like worthy foes for the Roosters in next week's grand final.

The Knights faithful turned Stadium Australia into a little piece of the Hunter, proving yet again they would follow their team into hell itself if Sid Fogg's would charter a bus there.

Francis Manuleleua's long-range try, the latest scorching adventure of the screaming Knights, gave the beast inside the 55,000-strong crowd a smell of blood and it turned the Panthers into strangers in their own country.

The Penrith half of the crowd rose for Blaize Talagi's score off a clever Jack Cogger kick, but never has Nathan Cleary, benched before kick-off, copped such treatment on his home turf as he did before he entered the game in the 20th minute.

Just 10 minutes later came the tackle that ended his season as he suffered a compound fracture to his ankle, also ending Phoenix Crossland's afternoon after he was sent off, and putting this game on the raggedy edge.

In the end, it was the Knights who pushed the Panthers over the side to write their names in history, with a 22-14 win that sends Newcastle to their first grand final in 25 years.

The Knights finished with 12 on the field after Crossland's dismissal but, somehow, looked shorthanded.

The Panthers missed Cleary, their edges blunted, but Casey McLean came close to scoring.

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