Fremantle's women have lifted their club as they surged into the AFLW top eight, while Collingwood broke through for its first win of the season.
In the other early game on Sunday, Collingwood outlasted GWS 4.10 to 3.7 in a low-scoring arm wrestle at Victoria Park.
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Headline as published: Freo finds joy in AFLW win, Pies finally off the mark
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Fremantle's women have lifted their club as they surged into the AFLW top eight, while Collingwood broke through for its first win of the season.
The fast-starting Dockers outscored Adelaide 28-0 in the first quarter and led by as much as 45 on their way to a comfortable 9.6 to 5.5 victory over Adelaide at Unley Oval.
Adelaide kicked three straight goals either side of three-quarter time, but never got the deficit below 25, as Fremantle defended its advantage, unlike its male counterparts in Saturday's AFL grand final.
In the other early game on Sunday, Collingwood outlasted GWS 4.10 to 3.7 in a low-scoring arm wrestle at Victoria Park.
In Sydney, the Lions fell short of a stirring comeback of their own in a 5.7 to 3.5 defeat to the Swans.
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