The partner of Constable Mia Lay has spoken on behalf of her grief-stricken family.
Sydney, NSW
‘The happiest girl I had met’: Partner speaks after officer killed in Sydney crash
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‘Going urgent isn’t worth your life’: Partner’s plea‘The happiest girl I had met’: Partner speaks after officer killed in Sydney crash
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‘Going urgent isn’t worth your life’: Partner’s plea after officer killed in Sydney crash.
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| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| Brisbane Timesas they published this story | 7.8 |
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WAtoday
‘The happiest girl I had met’: Partner speaks after officer killed in Sydney crash
Niral 7.8
political 0
The Age
‘The happiest girl I had met’: Partner speaks after officer killed in Sydney crash
Niral 7.8
political 0
The Sydney Morning Herald
‘The happiest girl I had met’: Partner speaks after officer killed in Sydney crash
Niral 7.8
political 0