A 90-year-old grandmother allegedly stabbed 19 times inside her Bondi Beach home has been remembered as a gentle woman dedicated to her Jewish faith.
Facing court on Sunday, Mitnik’s lawyer raised concerns about his mental health and told the court the weight-loss drug Ozempic had had an effect on him.
Detective Superintendent Jodi Radmore said there was no known history of domestic violence between Mitnik and his grandmother, although he had a domestic violence history involving another person.
If you or someone you know is experiencing family violence, phone 1800 RESPECT or the Crisis Care Helpline on 1800 199 008.
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Detective Superintendent Jodi Radmore said there was no known history of domestic violence between Mitnik and his grandmother. If you or someone you know is experiencing family violence, phone 1800 RESPECT or the Crisis Care Helpline on 1800 199 008.
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A 90-year-old grandmother allegedly stabbed 19 times inside her Bondi Beach home has been remembered as a gentle woman dedicated to her Jewish faith.
Valentina Spivak was found with stab wounds to her throat and torso at her unit on Chambers Ave about 5.15pm on Saturday.
Despite efforts to save her, she died at the scene.
Facing court on Sunday, Mitnik’s lawyer raised concerns about his mental health and told the court the weight-loss drug Ozempic had had an effect on him.
Mitnik is due to appear at Downing Centre Local Court on Thursday.
Detective Superintendent Jodi Radmore said there was no known history of domestic violence between Mitnik and his grandmother, although he had a domestic violence history involving another person.
Neighbours remembered Spivak as a quiet and gentle woman.
If you or someone you know is experiencing family violence, phone 1800 RESPECT or the Crisis Care Helpline on 1800 199 008.
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