Astronauts Reid Wiseman, Victor Glover, and Christina Koch of NASA and CSA astronaut Jeremy Hansen will share highlights from their mission at 7 p.m. CDT Wednesday, Sept. 30, during the free, public event at University of Houston’s Fertitta Center.
NASA’s Artemis II mission launched April 1 and splashed down in the Pacific Ocean on April 10.
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The National Aeronautic Association will recognize the crew for surpassing the record for human spaceflight’s farthest distance traveled, previously set by the Apollo 13 mission in 1970. The crew members were the first astronauts to launch on the agency’s SLS rocket, flying aboard NASA’s Orion spacecraft.
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The four astronauts of NASA’s Artemis II mission will participate in an event hosted by industry and community partners at the University of Houston to discuss their mission around the Moon aboard the Orion spacecraft.
Astronauts Reid Wiseman, Victor Glover, and Christina Koch of NASA and CSA astronaut Jeremy Hansen will share highlights from their mission at 7 p.m. CDT Wednesday, Sept. 30, during the free, public event at University of Houston’s Fertitta Center. Additionally, the National Aeronautic Association will recognize the crew for surpassing the record for human spaceflight’s farthest distance traveled, before set by the Apollo 13 mission in 1970.
NASA’s Artemis II mission launched April 1 and splashed down in the Pacific Ocean on April 10.
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