A marine biologist says the smell of a whale carcass recently removed from the Clarence River will attract sharks.
New South Wales
Shark warning for NSW river after whale carcass removed
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How outlets headlined it
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- ABC News Shark warning for NSW river after whale carcass removed plain
- The West Australian Whale of a job over, rotting carcass removed from beach plain
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ABC News
Dead whale
finallybeing removed from Perth beach, four days after washing up 1 change -
Brisbane Times
Whale carcass
finallyremoved from City Beach 1 change -
The West Australian
City Beach whale:
Hugelarge 18 tonne carcassfinallytrucked away butmassivelarge sharks continue to stalk coastline 3 changes
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| Outlet | Niral Score | Adjectives | Sourcing | Sentiment | Happiness |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| ABC Newsas they published this story | 4.6 | 1 | 80 | -0.1 | 42.4 |
| ABC News | 8.6 | 4 | 58 | -0.5 | 30 |
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