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Teens hospitalised after alleged house party knife attack

Brisbane Times Cameron Atfield
Summary

From the report

A 16-year-old boy has been arrested over an incident at a party in Brisbane’s west that landed two teens in hospital.

How outlets headlined it

Each outlet's own headline. Struck through: the loaded words our version leaves out. Plainest first.

  • Brisbane Times Teens hospitalised after alleged house party knife attack plain
  • The Age Teens stabbed at Brisbane house party plain

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How this outlet filed it, and how we rewrote it

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Also covered by The Age, Brisbane Times, The Sydney Morning Herald, WAtoday. We hold only their summary of it, not the report, so there is nothing of theirs to measure here.

Outlet Niral Score
Brisbane Timesas they published this story 2.1

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The Age Teens stabbed at Brisbane house party Niral 4.1 · calm political 0 Brisbane Times Teens stabbed at Brisbane house party Niral 4.1 · calm political 0 The Sydney Morning Herald Teens stabbed at Brisbane house party Niral 4.1 · calm political 0 WAtoday Teens stabbed at Brisbane house party Niral 4.1 · calm political 0 The Age Teens hospitalised after alleged house party knife attack Niral 2.1 · calm political 0 WAtoday Teens hospitalised after alleged house party knife attack Niral 2.1 · calm political 0 The Sydney Morning Herald Teens hospitalised after alleged house party knife attack Niral 2.1 · calm political 0