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Two students killed in Philippine school shooting

WAtoday Nestor Corrales, Mikhail Flores
Summary

Asia

From the report

The incident follows two fatal gun incidents since June at schools in the Philippines, where school shootings were previously rare.

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Not from this story. A library photograph of classroom school pupils, used to illustrate it. Rwanda Classroom edited Rwanda_Classroom.jpg : Colleen Taugher from Lewiston Idaho, USA derivative work: Everyguy ( talk ) / Wikimedia Commons, CC BY

This is a summary. The indicators are not. The scores were measured over this summary alone, which is less of the article than we would like and makes them less certain.

How outlets headlined it

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  • WAtoday Two students killed in Philippine school shooting plain
  • The West Australian Philippine teen kills two students in school shooting plain

How this outlet filed it, and how we rewrote it

No other newsroom we read has filed on this event, so there is nothing to compare it with yet.

Also covered by The West Australian, Brisbane Times, The Age, The Sydney Morning Herald. We hold only their summary of it, not the report, so there is nothing of theirs to measure here.

Outlet Niral Score
WAtodayas they published this story 11.1

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The same event elsewhere

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The West Australian Philippine teen kills two students in school shooting Niral 14.2 political 0 Brisbane Times Two students killed in Philippine school shooting Niral 11.1 political 0 The Age Two students killed in Philippine school shooting Niral 11.1 political 0 The Sydney Morning Herald Two students killed in Philippine school shooting Niral 11.1 political 0