The incident follows two fatal gun incidents since June at schools in the Philippines, where school shootings were previously rare.
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Two students killed in Philippine school shooting
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How outlets headlined it
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- Brisbane Times Two students killed in Philippine school shooting plain
- The West Australian Philippine teen kills two students in school shooting plain
How this outlet filed it, and how we rewrote it
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Also covered by The West Australian, WAtoday, The Age, The Sydney Morning Herald. We hold only their summary of it, not the report, so there is nothing of theirs to measure here.
| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| Brisbane Timesas they published this story | 11.1 |
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The same event elsewhere
4 other outlets filed this story. The scoreboard above is what they did differently.
The West Australian
Philippine teen kills two students in school shooting
Niral 14.2
political 0
WAtoday
Two students killed in Philippine school shooting
Niral 11.1
political 0
The Age
Two students killed in Philippine school shooting
Niral 11.1
political 0
The Sydney Morning Herald
Two students killed in Philippine school shooting
Niral 11.1
political 0