A West Australian man accused of murdering a 17-year-old Thai girl and hiding her body in a suitcase has pleaded not guilty at his first court appearance.
Western Australia
WA man Simon Peter Carman pleads not guilty to murdering Thai teenager and hiding her body in suitcase
From the report
This is a summary. The indicators are not. The scores were measured over this summary alone, which is less of the article than we would like and makes them less certain.
How outlets headlined it
Each outlet's own headline. Struck through: the loaded words our version leaves out. Plainest first.
- The West Australian WA man Simon Peter Carman pleads not guilty to murdering Thai teenager and hiding her body in suitcase plain
- WAtoday Thai suitcase murder suspect pleads not guilty to all charges plain
- The Guardian Australia Australian man accused of murdering Thai teenager and putting body in suitcase pleads not guilty plain
How each outlet filed it
Also covered by WAtoday, Brisbane Times, The Sydney Morning Herald, The Age. We hold only their summary of it, not the report, so there is nothing of theirs to measure here.
| Outlet | Niral Score | Adjectives | Sourcing | Happiness |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| The West Australianas they published this story | 4.1 | 0 | 42 | 50 |
| The Guardian Australia | 7 | 4 | 70 | 37.7 |
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The same event elsewhere
5 other outlets filed this story. The scoreboard above is what they did differently.