A bottle shop worker has used a baseball bat to fight off armed machete thugs who invaded his store.
Worker uses baseball bat to fight thugs
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Also covered by Brisbane Times, The Sydney Morning Herald, WAtoday. We hold only their summary of it, not the report, so there is nothing of theirs to measure here.
| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| The Ageas they published this story | 5.2 |
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