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Accused High Country killer Greg Lynn makes new bail bid

Part of the story Beau Lamarre-Condon trial shown CCTV of accused’s movements across Sydney after alleged double murder

The Age
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From the report

Accused killer Greg Lynn is launching another bid for bail as he awaits his retrial.

How outlets headlined it

Each outlet's own headline. Struck through: the loaded words our plainer version leaves out. Fewest struck first.

  • The Age Accused High Country killer Greg Lynn makes new bail bid
  • The West Australian Accused killer to make second bail bid ahead of retrial
  • WAtoday New CCTV shows moments after Luke Davies and Jesse Baird were killed
  • The Canberra Times Accused machete attacker admits injuring man on first day of attempted murder trial
  • The West Australian Trial against nurses accused of anti-Semitism delayed
  • The Guardian Australia Jurors in Beau Lamarre-Condon murder trial shown photo of alleged ‘execution-style’ gunshot wound
  • The West Australian CCTV shows moment Beau Lamarre-Condon returns to TV presenter’s home with cleaning gear after alleged murders
  • Brisbane Times Lamarre-Condon captured on CCTV after alleged double murder
  • WAtoday Beau Lamarre-Condon after alleged double murder
  • The Guardian Australia Beau Lamarre-Condon trial shown CCTV of accused’s movements across Sydney after alleged double murder
  • The West Australian Beau Lamarre-Condon accused of keeping Sydney couple’s bodies in van overnight after alleged murders
  • 7NEWS Beau Lamarre-Condon murder trial: Accused killer cop filmed with mop and bucket after alleged killings 1 change
  • ABC News CCTV of Lamarre-Condon shows alleged killer's movements hours after deaths 1 change

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The Sydney Morning Herald, WAtoday, Brisbane Times, The West Australian and The Canberra Times also covered it; we only receive their summaries, so their writing is not scored here.

Outlet Language LoadAdjectivesper 100 wordsSourcingSentimentMood
The Ageas they published this story Not scored: we only receive a 25-word summary of this report.
7NEWS 17.1 1.6 52 -1.6 13.7
ABC News 15 1.5 52 -0.7 18.2
The Guardian Australia 12 1.6 70 -0.8 5.3

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9 outlets from 5 newsrooms reported this story: the one you are reading and the other 8 below. The table above compares the reports we could score. Compare how 9 outlets covered it.

The Sydney Morning Herald Accused High Country killer Greg Lynn makes new bail bid summary only, not scored WAtoday Accused High Country killer Greg Lynn makes new bail bid summary only, not scored Brisbane Times Accused High Country killer Greg Lynn makes new bail bid summary only, not scored The West Australian Accused killer to make second bail bid ahead of retrial summary only, not scored 7NEWS Beau Lamarre-Condon murder trial: Accused cop filmed with mop and bucket after alleged killings Language Load 17.1 · light load ABC News CCTV of Lamarre-Condon shows alleged movements hours after deaths Language Load 15 · light load The Canberra Times Accused machete attacker admits injuring man on first day of attempted murder trial summary only, not scored The Guardian Australia Jurors in Beau Lamarre-Condon murder trial shown photo of alleged ‘execution-style’ gunshot wound Language Load 12 · light load