An alleged Coconut Cartel kingpin linked to the fatal shooting of a 11-year-old in Norwest has been arrested.
Crime and courts
Alleged crime kingpin arrested following fatal shooting of 11-year-old
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How outlets headlined it
Each outlet's own headline.
- The Age Alleged crime kingpin arrested following fatal shooting of 11-year-old
- 7NEWS Airport arrest for alleged Coconut Cartel leader linked to Sydney schoolboy's shooting death
A summary of The Age’s report.
How calmly each outlet wrote it
WAtoday, Brisbane Times and The Sydney Morning Herald also covered it; we only receive their summaries, so their writing is not scored here.
| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| The Ageas they published this story | Not scored: we only receive a 27-word summary of this report. |
| 7NEWS | 91.4 |
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The same event elsewhere
5 outlets from 2 newsrooms reported this story: the one you are reading and the other 4 below. The table above compares the reports we could score.
7NEWS
Airport arrest for alleged Coconut Cartel leader linked to Sydney schoolboy's shooting death
Niral 91.4 · calm writing
political 0
WAtoday
Alleged crime kingpin arrested following fatal shooting of 11-year-old
summary only, not scored
Brisbane Times
Alleged crime kingpin arrested following fatal shooting of 11-year-old
summary only, not scored
The Sydney Morning Herald
Alleged crime kingpin arrested following fatal shooting of 11-year-old
summary only, not scored