A close friend of one of two men allegedly murdered by Beau Lamarre-Condon told the court a scared Jesse Baird had kept saying the accused “has a gun”.
Courts / New South Wales
Alleged victim of ex-cop was ‘petrified’ before his death, court told
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- WAtoday Alleged victim of ex-cop was ‘petrified’ before his death, court told plain
- WAtoday Ex-boyfriend of alleged killer “petrified” before death plain
- Brisbane Times Ex-boyfriend of alleged killer ‘petrified’ before death plain
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| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| WAtodayas they published this story | 9.1 |
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The same event elsewhere
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The Age
Alleged victim of ex-cop was ‘petrified’ before his death, court told
Niral 9.1
political 0
Brisbane Times
Alleged victim of ex-cop was ‘petrified’ before his death, court told
Niral 9.1
political 0
The Sydney Morning Herald
Alleged victim of ex-cop was ‘petrified’ before his death, court told
Niral 9.1
political 0
WAtoday
Ex-boyfriend of alleged killer “petrified” before death
Niral 6.3
political 0
The Sydney Morning Herald
Ex-boyfriend of alleged killer “petrified” before death
Niral 6.3
political 0
Brisbane Times
Ex-boyfriend of alleged killer “petrified” before death
Niral 6.3
political 0
The Age
Ex-boyfriend of alleged killer “petrified” before death
Niral 6.3
political 0
Brisbane Times
Ex-boyfriend of alleged killer ‘petrified’ before death
Niral 6.3
political 0