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Alleged victim of ex-cop was ‘petrified’ before his death, court told

Brisbane Times Michaela Whitbourn, Megan Gorrey
Summary

From the report

A close friend of one of two men allegedly murdered by Beau Lamarre-Condon told the court a scared Jesse Baird had kept saying the accused “has a gun”.

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  • Brisbane Times Alleged victim of ex-cop was ‘petrified’ before his death, court told plain
  • WAtoday Ex-boyfriend of alleged killer “petrified” before death plain
  • Brisbane Times Ex-boyfriend of alleged killer ‘petrified’ before death plain

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Also covered by WAtoday, The Age, The Sydney Morning Herald, Brisbane Times. We hold only their summary of it, not the report, so there is nothing of theirs to measure here.

Outlet Niral Score
Brisbane Timesas they published this story 9.1

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WAtoday Alleged victim of ex-cop was ‘petrified’ before his death, court told Niral 9.1 political 0 The Age Alleged victim of ex-cop was ‘petrified’ before his death, court told Niral 9.1 political 0 The Sydney Morning Herald Alleged victim of ex-cop was ‘petrified’ before his death, court told Niral 9.1 political 0 WAtoday Ex-boyfriend of alleged killer “petrified” before death Niral 6.3 political 0 The Sydney Morning Herald Ex-boyfriend of alleged killer “petrified” before death Niral 6.3 political 0 Brisbane Times Ex-boyfriend of alleged killer “petrified” before death Niral 6.3 political 0 The Age Ex-boyfriend of alleged killer “petrified” before death Niral 6.3 political 0 Brisbane Times Ex-boyfriend of alleged killer ‘petrified’ before death Niral 6.3 political 0