The West AustralianA troop carrier vehicle won't be used by the defence force while an investigation is carried out into the death of a soldier during a training exercise.
Army pauses use of vehicle involved in training death
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- The West Australian Army pauses use of vehicle involved in training death
- ABC News Use of Supacat paused as army chief reveals soldier killed was not at wheel
A summary of The West Australian’s report.
How calmly each outlet wrote it
| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| The West Australianas they published this story | Not scored: we only receive a 36-word summary of this report. |
| ABC News | 94.3 |
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