A 16-year-old girl is in a critical condition in hospital after she was allegedly hit by an e-bike rider who was over the legal alcohol limit and had drugs.
Barrack Heights e-bike crash: 16yo girl in critical condition after she was allegedly hit by drunk rider
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- 7NEWS Barrack Heights e-bike crash: 16yo girl in critical condition after she was allegedly hit by drunk rider
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ABC News
Teen pedestrian
criticalafter being hit by e-bike near Wollongong 1 change
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How calmly each outlet wrote it
| Outlet | Niral Score | Adjectives | Sourcing | Sentiment | Mood |
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| 7NEWSas they published this story | 91.4 | 2 | 37 | -0.3 | 38.1 |
| ABC News | 87.1 | 3 | 11 | 0 | 51.6 |
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