The West AustralianEssendon have traded luckless defender Jordan Ridley to Geelong in a deal for utility Jack Bowes and future draft picks.
Geelong, VIC
Cats, Bombers swap players and picks in Ridley trade
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- The West Australian Cats, Bombers swap players and picks in Ridley trade
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ABC News (Sport)
Live: Dons offload Ridley in
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A summary of The West Australian’s report.
How calmly each outlet wrote it
| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| The West Australianas they published this story | Not scored: we only receive a 29-word summary of this report. |
| ABC News (Sport) | 78.6 |
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