Accused double murderer Beau Lamarre-Condon allegedly asked a friend if he would fit inside a surfboard bag, a Sydney court has heard.
Courts / New South Wales
CCTV from date, an alleged break-in: Exhibits in ex-cop’s murder trial
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CCTV
and the $85 surfboard cover: Video playedfrom date, an alleged break-in: Exhibits in ex-cop’s murder trial
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- The Sydney Morning Herald CCTV from date, an alleged break-in: Exhibits in ex-cop’s murder trial plain
- WAtoday CCTV and the $85 surfboard cover: Video played in ex-cop’s murder trial plain
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| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| The Sydney Morning Heraldas they published this story | 2.3 |
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