Hundreds gathered at Bondi Beach on Wednesday morning, and again at Central Synagogue in Sydney’s east on Wednesday evening, to remember the October 7 attacks on Israel.
Bondi, NSW
‘Direct line between October 7 and Bondi’: Vigils remember Jewish massacre
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- The Sydney Morning Herald ‘Direct line between October 7 and Bondi’: Vigils remember Jewish massacre
- Brisbane Times Third anniversary of October 7 attacks
- The West Australian Day of mourning as Australia remembers October 7 attack
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‘Direct line between October 7 and Bondi’: Vigils remember Jewish massacre
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‘Direct line between October 7 and Bondi’: Vigils remember Jewish massacre
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Day of mourning as Australia remembers October 7 attack
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