“Unusual” sample results have forced several popular Perth beaches to remain closed after a whale carcass washed ashore at City Beach last week.
Perth, WA
‘High bacteria levels’ keep Perth beaches shut after whale carcass moved
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‘High bacteria levels’ keep Perth beaches shut after whale carcass moved
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