About 400 people have gathered to peacefully protest Australia's biggest land defence expo held in Perth this year.
Business / Perth, WA
Hundreds protest against Australia's largest defence expo in Perth
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- ABC News Hundreds protest against Australia's largest defence expo in Perth
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WAtoday
Behind the scenes at Perth’s
most controversialexpo 1 change -
The Age
ControversialDefence expo opens in Perth 1 change
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| Outlet | Niral Score |
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| ABC Newsas they published this story | 89.3 |
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