The passenger aged in her 20s was in a car that slammed into a tree by the side of Indian Ocean Dr in Breton Bay.
Indian Ocean Drive: Passenger killed as car slams into tree in Breton Bay, north of Perth
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- 7NEWS Indian Ocean Drive: Passenger killed as car slams into tree in Breton Bay, north of Perth
- The West Australian Woman critically injured, dies at scene of single-car crash on Indian Ocean Drive in Breton Bay
- The West Australian Woman dies in crash on Indian Ocean Drive near Seabird Road intersection in Breton Bay
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| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| 7NEWSas they published this story | 83.6 |
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