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Lanning decries ‘disgusting’ late hit that sends Oregon QB Dante Moore to hospital

The Guardian Australia (Sport)
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  • Senior able to move limbs but taken to hospital.
  • Oregon head coach Dan Lanning has decried a “disgusting play” that left his starting quarterback, Dante Moore, in hospital during the Ducks’ 41-27 win over USC.
  • An Oregon spokesperson later ⁠said that Moore had movement in all of his extremities and was ​being evaluated.
  • As he tried to slide, he was hit in the head by Stephens, who was called for targeting and disqualified ‌from the game.
  • Moore was an All-Big ​Ten third-team selection last season, throwing for 3,565 yards, 30 ​touchdowns and 10 ‌interceptions as the ​team went ​13-2.

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Senior able to move limbs but taken to hospital. An Oregon spokesperson later ⁠said that Moore had movement in all of his extremities and was ​being evaluated.

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Senior able to move limbs but taken to hospital.

USC linebacker Desman Stephens II ejected for play.

Oregon head coach Dan Lanning has decried a “disgusting play” that left his starting quarterback, Dante Moore, in hospital during the Ducks’ 41-27 win over USC.

Moore was carted off the field after a late hit by Trojans linebacker ⁠Desman Stephens II in the first half of Saturday’s game in Los Angeles. An Oregon spokesperson later ⁠said that Moore had movement in all of his extremities and was ​being evaluated.

During the play, Moore took off on a scramble. As he tried to slide, he was hit in the head by Stephens, who was called for targeting and disqualified ‌from the game.

“Seeing him like that shook the whole team,” said Oregon backup quarterback Dylan Raiola, who replaced Moore for the rest of the game.

Moore was 8 of 10 ⁠passing for 77 yards, and Raiola was 19 of 25 for 289 ​yards and two ​touchdown passes.

Moore was an All-Big ​Ten third-team selection last season, throwing for 3,565 yards, 30 ​touchdowns and 10 ‌interceptions as the ​team went ​13-2.

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