Point Piper neighbours had a bird's-eye view of the party at Di Maloney's home on Saturday night.
New South Wales
Maloney’s latest celebration at Point Piper home
From the report
How outlets headlined it
Each outlet's own headline. Struck through: the loaded words our calmer version leaves out. Calmest first.
- The Sydney Morning Herald Maloney’s latest celebration at Point Piper home plain
- WAtoday Woollahra mayor says 'I don't own a house', forgets apartments plain
A summary of The Sydney Morning Herald’s report, scored on this summary only.
How calmly it was written
WAtoday, Brisbane Times and The Age also covered it; we only receive their summaries, so their writing is not scored here.
| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| The Sydney Morning Heraldas they published this story | 90 |
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The same event elsewhere
4 other outlets filed this story. The scoreboard above is what they did differently.
WAtoday
Woollahra mayor says 'I don't own a house', forgets apartments
Niral 93.2 · calm
political 0
Brisbane Times
Maloney’s latest celebration at Point Piper home
Niral 90 · calm
political 0
The Age
Maloney’s latest celebration at Point Piper home
Niral 90 · calm
political 0
WAtoday
Maloney’s latest celebration at Point Piper home
Niral 90 · calm
political 0