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Man jailed for distressing gun videos sent to teen daughter and pushing his mum to ask victims to drop charges

The West Australian Tegan Guthrie
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A man sent his teenage daughter a video of himself pointing a homemade pistol in his mouth and pulling the trigger before sending another one pointing the barrel.

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