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One child dead and two children in critical condition after Blue Mountains stabbing

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  • the headline was changed: One child dead and two children and woman in critical condition after Blue Mountains stabbing

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Police said NSW Ambulance treated the two children and the woman, believed to be in her 40s, at the scene before they were taken to Westmead hospital, where all three are listed as being in a critical condition.

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Crime scene established at Waratah Road, Valley Heights as NSW police say they ‘are not looking for any other people at this time’.

A child has died in a stabbing attack in the Blue Mountains, with two other children and a woman in hospital in critical condition, New South Wales police say.

Police said NSW Ambulance treated the two children and the woman, believed to be in her 40s, at the scene before they were taken to Westmead hospital, where all three are listed as being in a critical condition.

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  • The Guardian Australia One child dead and two children in critical condition after Blue Mountains stabbing plain
  • ABC News 5yo dead, two children and woman critical in Blue Mountains stabbing plain
  • 7NEWS Child dead, two others fighting for life after alleged stabbing in Blue Mountains plain
  • The West Australian Child dies, two other children and woman fighting for life after horror stabbing in Blue Mountains town plain
  • WAtoday ‘Unimaginable grief’: Child dead and two critical after Blue Mountains stabbing caps weekend of horror 1 change
  • The West Australian Child found dead, two more critical after stabbing 1 change

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Also covered by WAtoday, Brisbane Times, The Sydney Morning Herald, The Age, The West Australian. We hold only their summary of it, not the report, so there is nothing of theirs to measure here.

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The Guardian Australiaas they published this story 6.4 2 83 -0.5 24.8
ABC News 7 0 77 -0.5 23.7
7NEWS 4.3 1 77 -0.6 16
Mundane Readneutralized from 7NEWS 4.3 1 77 -0.6 16

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