The West AustralianWith the first day of trading done and dusted, Fremantle great Paul Hasleby reviews all the day's deals and why one move has left him unconvinced of a contender's status.
Fremantle, WA
Paul Hasleby’s trade grades: Scott Pendlebury, Zach Merrett and Jesse Hogan deals assessed after day one
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- The West Australian Paul Hasleby’s trade grades: Scott Pendlebury, Zach Merrett and Jesse Hogan deals assessed after day one plain
- ABC News (Sport) Merrett becomes a Hawk in shock late deal on day one of AFL trade period plain
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| Outlet | Niral Score | Adjectives | Sourcing | Sentiment | Happiness |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| The West Australianas they published this story | 92 | 1 | 42 | 0 | 50 |
| ABC News (Sport) | 86 | 5 | 10 | 0.4 | 61.2 |
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