A new $126 million visitor centre has opened at Victoria’s Twelve Apostles.
Culture / Victoria
Pay to view: new visitor centre opens at Twelve Apostles
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How outlets headlined it
Each outlet's own headline. Struck through: the loaded words our calmer version leaves out. Fewest struck first.
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The Age
Pay to view:
Controversialnew visitor centre opens at Twelve Apostles 1 change -
ABC News
Tourists must pay and book ahead to see
iconicTwelve Apostles 1 change
Headline as published: Pay to view: Controversial new visitor centre opens at Twelve Apostles
A summary of The Age’s report.
How calmly each outlet wrote it
Brisbane Times, The Sydney Morning Herald and WAtoday also covered it; we only receive their summaries, so their writing is not scored here.
| Outlet | Niral Score |
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| The Ageas they published this story | Not scored: we only receive a 23-word summary of this report. |
| ABC News | 89.7 |
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The same event elsewhere
5 outlets from 2 newsrooms reported this story: the one you are reading and the other 4 below. The table above compares the reports we could score.
Brisbane Times
Pay to view: new visitor centre opens at Twelve Apostles
summary only, not scored
The Sydney Morning Herald
Pay to view: new visitor centre opens at Twelve Apostles
summary only, not scored
WAtoday
Pay to view: new visitor centre opens at Twelve Apostles
summary only, not scored
ABC News
Tourists must pay and book ahead to see Twelve Apostles
Niral 89.7 · mostly calm writing
political 0