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Senior police officer breaks down in court in ex-cop’s murder trial

WAtoday
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A senior police officer has broken down in the witness box as she described finding the remains of the two men allegedly killed by Beau Lamarre-Condon.

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  • WAtoday Senior police officer breaks down in court in ex-cop’s murder trial
  • The West Australian ‘Strong smell’: Detective breaks down speaking about search for bodies of Beau Lamarre-Condon’s alleged victims
  • The Guardian Australia Detective breaks down in court as she recalls finding Beau Lamarre-Condon’s alleged murder victims

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Brisbane Times, The Sydney Morning Herald, The Age and The West Australian also covered it; we only receive their summaries, so their writing is not scored here.

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The Guardian Australia 91.6

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6 outlets from 3 newsrooms reported this story: the one you are reading and the other 5 below. The table above compares the reports we could score.

Brisbane Times Senior police officer breaks down in court in ex-cop’s murder trial summary only, not scored The Sydney Morning Herald Senior police officer breaks down in court in ex-cop’s murder trial summary only, not scored The Age Senior police officer breaks down in court in ex-cop’s murder trial summary only, not scored The West Australian ‘Strong smell’: Detective breaks down speaking about search for bodies of Beau Lamarre-Condon’s alleged victims summary only, not scored The Guardian Australia Detective breaks down in court as she recalls finding Beau Lamarre-Condon’s alleged murder victims Niral 91.6 · calm writing political 0