The West AustralianAn Australian soldier has died in a training incident in the Northern Territory.
Soldier dead after training incident in the Northern Territory
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- The West Australian Soldier dead after training incident in the Northern Territory
- 7NEWS Australian soldier killed in training exercise at Northern Territory military base
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