The West AustralianThe Australian Defence Force has confirmed one soldier has died during an incident at its Mount Bundey training area.
Soldier dies, five injured in training exercise
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How outlets headlined it
Each outlet's own headline. Struck through: the loaded words our calmer version leaves out. Fewest struck first.
- The West Australian Soldier dies, five injured in training exercise
- WAtoday Australian soldier killed in NT military exercise
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ABC News
Breaking:Australian Army soldier dies in training exercise 1 change
A summary of The West Australian’s report.
How calmly each outlet wrote it
WAtoday and The Age also covered it; we only receive their summaries, so their writing is not scored here.
| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| The West Australianas they published this story | Not scored: we only receive a 26-word summary of this report. |
| ABC News | 91.2 |
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