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Surfer Mel Ismail opens up on moment he came face-to-face with shark at Glenfield Beach before it took his leg
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How outlets headlined it
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- The West Australian Surfer Mel Ismail opens up on moment he came face-to-face with shark at Glenfield Beach before it took his leg
- 7NEWS Surfer Mel Ismail opens up on moment he came face-to-face with shark at Western Australia’s Glenfield Beach before it took his leg
A summary of The West Australian’s report.
How calmly each outlet wrote it
| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| The West Australianas they published this story | Not scored: we only receive a 39-word summary of this report. |
| 7NEWS | 89.1 |
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