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The story behind Jaymie Graham’s rise to become North Melbourne senior coach

The West Australian Glen Quartermain
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From the report

Jaymie Graham’s climb to the top rung of AFL coaching has been hard school, pocked with life’s big picture potholes.

How outlets headlined it

Each outlet's own headline. Struck through: the loaded words our calmer version leaves out. Fewest struck first.

  • The West Australian Fremantle Dockers forwards give Jaymie Graham glowing send off after appointment as North Melbourne coach
  • The West Australian Former West Coast Eagle player and Fremantle Dockers assistant Jaymie Graham’s path to head coach
  • The West Australian Jaymie Graham: Fremantle Dockers forwards pay tribute to outgoing assistant as he takes on North Melbourne job
  • The West Australian Jaymie Graham: North Melbourne confirm Fremantle Dockers assistant will be new senior coach
  • The West Australian 'Very best person': Kangaroos confirm new AFL coach
  • ABC News Jaymie Graham named new North Melbourne AFL coach
  • The Age North Melbourne coaching job decided: Jaymie Graham appointed
  • The West Australian North Melbourne set to unveil Jaymie Graham as new senior coach as soon as this week
  • The West Australian The story behind Jaymie Graham’s extraordinary rise to become North Melbourne senior coach 1 change

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Headline as published: The story behind Jaymie Graham’s extraordinary rise to become North Melbourne senior coach

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How calmly each outlet wrote it

The Age, The Sydney Morning Herald, Brisbane Times and WAtoday also covered it; we only receive their summaries, so their writing is not scored here.

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The West Australianas they published this story Not scored: we only receive a 33-word summary of this report.
ABC News 90.7

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The same event elsewhere

6 outlets from 3 newsrooms reported this story: the one you are reading and the other 5 below. The table above compares the reports we could score.

ABC News Jaymie Graham named new North Melbourne AFL coach Niral 90.7 · calm writing political 0 The Age North Melbourne coaching job decided: Jaymie Graham appointed summary only, not scored The Sydney Morning Herald North Melbourne coaching job decided: Jaymie Graham appointed summary only, not scored Brisbane Times North Melbourne coaching job decided: Jaymie Graham appointed summary only, not scored WAtoday North Melbourne coaching job decided: Jaymie Graham appointed summary only, not scored