The woman says she was with the accused double killer when he drove to the NSW southern tablelands after the alleged murders of Jesse Baird and Luke Davies.
Crime and courts / Sydney, NSW
The white van and the angle grinder: What Lamarre-Condon’s friend told police
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- The Age The white van and the angle grinder: What Lamarre-Condon’s friend told police
- The Guardian Australia Beau Lamarre-Condon didn’t talk about Jesse Baird to friend in lead-up to alleged murders, court hears
A summary of The Age’s report.
How calmly each outlet wrote it
WAtoday, Brisbane Times and The Sydney Morning Herald also covered it; we only receive their summaries, so their writing is not scored here.
| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| The Ageas they published this story | Not scored: we only receive a 46-word summary of this report. |
| The Guardian Australia | 91.7 |
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The same event elsewhere
5 outlets from 2 newsrooms reported this story: the one you are reading and the other 4 below. The table above compares the reports we could score.
WAtoday
The white van and the angle grinder: What Lamarre-Condon’s friend told police
summary only, not scored
Brisbane Times
The white van and the angle grinder: What Lamarre-Condon’s friend told police
summary only, not scored
The Sydney Morning Herald
The white van and the angle grinder: What Lamarre-Condon’s friend told police
summary only, not scored
The Guardian Australia
Beau Lamarre-Condon didn’t talk about Jesse Baird to friend in lead-up to alleged murders, court hears
Niral 91.7 · calm writing
political 0