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Two more teens charged with murder over 21yo’s party death
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How outlets headlined it
Each outlet's own headline.
- WAtoday Two more teens charged with murder over 21yo’s party death
- The West Australian Two more charged with murder over house party bashing
- ABC News Two more charged with murder over fatal house party attack
A summary of WAtoday’s report.
How calmly each outlet wrote it
The Age, Brisbane Times, The Sydney Morning Herald and The West Australian also covered it; we only receive their summaries, so their writing is not scored here.
| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| WAtodayas they published this story | Not scored: we only receive a 40-word summary of this report. |
| ABC News | 89.6 |
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The same event elsewhere
6 outlets from 3 newsrooms reported this story: the one you are reading and the other 5 below. The table above compares the reports we could score.
The Age
Two more teens charged with murder over 21yo’s party death
summary only, not scored
Brisbane Times
Two more teens charged with murder over 21yo’s party death
summary only, not scored
The Sydney Morning Herald
Two more teens charged with murder over 21yo’s party death
summary only, not scored
The West Australian
Two more charged with murder over house party bashing
summary only, not scored
ABC News
Two more charged with murder over fatal house party attack
Niral 89.6 · mostly calm writing
political 0