Mourners gathered at St Andrew’s Cathedral in Sydney’s CBD to farewell Mia Lay, 20, who died in a car crash.
Sydney, NSW
‘You were taken from us far too soon’: Funeral service for Constable Mia Lay
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Watch live:‘You were taken from us far too soon’: Funeral service forNSW PoliceConstable Mia Lay
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- Brisbane Times ‘You were taken from us far too soon’: Funeral service for Constable Mia Lay
- The Sydney Morning Herald Watch live: Funeral service for NSW Police Constable Mia Lay
- The West Australian Funeral for Police Constable Mia Lay to be held at St Andrew’s Cathedral in Sydney
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WAtoday
‘You were taken from us far too soon’: Funeral service for Constable Mia Lay
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The Age
‘You were taken from us far too soon’: Funeral service for Constable Mia Lay
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The Sydney Morning Herald
Watch live: Funeral service for NSW Police Constable Mia Lay
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The West Australian
Funeral for Police Constable Mia Lay to be held at St Andrew’s Cathedral in Sydney
summary only, not scored