The West AustralianA co-pilot who stabbed his captain on a FlyDubai flight in an alleged bid to crash the plane planned the attack before he worked for the airline, officials say.
Co-pilot 'planned FlyDubai attack before being hired'
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- The West Australian Co-pilot 'planned FlyDubai attack before being hired' plain
- The Age Co-pilot planned flydubai attack before joining airline, two Israeli officials say plain
A summary of The West Australian’s report, scored on this summary only.
How calmly it was written
The Age, The Sydney Morning Herald, WAtoday and Brisbane Times also covered it; we only receive their summaries, so their writing is not scored here.
| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| The West Australianas they published this story | 97.9 |
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The same event elsewhere
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The Age
Co-pilot planned flydubai attack before joining airline, two Israeli officials say
Niral 98.4 · calm
political 0
The Sydney Morning Herald
Co-pilot planned flydubai attack before joining airline, two Israeli officials say
Niral 98.4 · calm
political 0
WAtoday
Co-pilot planned flydubai attack before joining airline, two Israeli officials say
Niral 98.4 · calm
political 0
Brisbane Times
Co-pilot planned flydubai attack before joining airline, two Israeli officials say
Niral 98.4 · calm
political 0