Another source said Hamam al-Hammami also operated a flight to Tel Aviv earlier this year and intended to hijack and crash the plane then, but opted not to.
World / Israel
Co-pilot planned flydubai attack before joining airline, two Israeli officials say
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How outlets headlined it
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- Brisbane Times Co-pilot planned flydubai attack before joining airline, two Israeli officials say plain
- The West Australian Co-pilot 'planned FlyDubai attack before being hired' plain
A summary of Brisbane Times’s report, scored on this summary only.
How calmly it was written
The Age, The West Australian, The Sydney Morning Herald and WAtoday also covered it; we only receive their summaries, so their writing is not scored here.
| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| Brisbane Timesas they published this story | 98.4 |
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The same event elsewhere
4 other outlets filed this story. The scoreboard above is what they did differently.
The Age
Co-pilot planned flydubai attack before joining airline, two Israeli officials say
Niral 98.4 · calm
political 0
The West Australian
Co-pilot 'planned FlyDubai attack before being hired'
Niral 97.9 · calm
political 0
The Sydney Morning Herald
Co-pilot planned flydubai attack before joining airline, two Israeli officials say
Niral 98.4 · calm
political 0
WAtoday
Co-pilot planned flydubai attack before joining airline, two Israeli officials say
Niral 98.4 · calm
political 0