Tennis superstar Daniil Medvedev is disqualified from his China Open semi final against Novak Djokovic.
Sport / China
Medvedev disqualified in semi final
From the report
How outlets headlined it
Each outlet's own headline. Struck through: the loaded words our calmer version leaves out. Fewest struck first.
- The Guardian Australia (Sport) Daniil Medvedev disqualified from China Open semi after hitting fan with ball
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The Sydney Morning Herald
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Headline as published: Medvedev sensationally disqualified in semi final
A summary of The Sydney Morning Herald’s report.
How calmly each outlet wrote it
WAtoday, The Age and Brisbane Times also covered it; we only receive their summaries, so their writing is not scored here.
| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| The Sydney Morning Heraldas they published this story | Not scored: we only receive a 21-word summary of this report. |
| The Guardian Australia (Sport) | 87.6 |
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The same event elsewhere
5 outlets from 2 newsrooms reported this story: the one you are reading and the other 4 below. The table above compares the reports we could score.
WAtoday
Medvedev disqualified in semi final
summary only, not scored
The Age
Medvedev disqualified in semi final
summary only, not scored
Brisbane Times
Medvedev disqualified in semi final
summary only, not scored
The Guardian Australia
Daniil Medvedev disqualified from China Open semi after hitting fan with ball
Niral 87.6 · mostly calm writing
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