For my generation, the Mr Cruel crimes unfolded in two chapters: first as frightened children, and now as frightened parents.
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My daughters don’t know his name, but they quietly carry my fears of Mr Cruel
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Brisbane Times, The Age and The Sydney Morning Herald also covered it; we only receive their summaries, so their writing is not scored here.
| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| WAtodayas they published this story | 88.4 |
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Brisbane Times
My daughters don’t know his name, but they quietly carry my fears of Mr Cruel
Niral 88.4 · mostly calm
political 0
The Age
My daughters don’t know his name, but they quietly carry my fears of Mr Cruel
Niral 88.4 · mostly calm
political 0
The Sydney Morning Herald
My daughters don’t know his name, but they quietly carry my fears of Mr Cruel
Niral 88.4 · mostly calm
political 0