The federal Aboriginal minister has backed a West Australian grandmother’s pleas for a coronial inquest into the deaths of her three grandchildren at the hands of their Indigenous mother.
Courts / Port Hedland, WA
Pressure grows for inquest into Port Hedland triple murder
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How outlets headlined it
Each outlet's own headline. Struck through: the loaded words our calmer version leaves out. Calmest first.
- Brisbane Times Pressure grows for inquest into Port Hedland triple murder plain
- The West Australian Pressure grows for inquest into triple murder plain
A summary of Brisbane Times’s report, scored on this summary only.
How calmly it was written
The West Australian, WAtoday, The Age and The Sydney Morning Herald also covered it; we only receive their summaries, so their writing is not scored here.
| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| Brisbane Timesas they published this story | 95.8 |
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The West Australian
Pressure grows for inquest into triple murder
Niral 95.9 · calm
political 0
WAtoday
Pressure grows for inquest into Port Hedland triple murder
Niral 95.8 · calm
political 0
The Age
Pressure grows for inquest into Port Hedland triple murder
Niral 95.8 · calm
political 0
The Sydney Morning Herald
Pressure grows for inquest into Port Hedland triple murder
Niral 95.8 · calm
political 0