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Darwin, NT

Troop carrier fleet use paused following death of young solider

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A fleet of troop carriers has been parked by the Defence Force after the death of a young soldier near Darwin.

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  • The West Australian Army pauses use of vehicle involved in training death
  • ABC News Use of Supacat paused as army chief reveals soldier killed was not at wheel
  • WAtoday Troop carrier fleet use paused following tragic death of young solider 1 change

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Headline as published: Troop carrier fleet use paused following tragic death of young solider

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How calmly each outlet wrote it

Brisbane Times, The Sydney Morning Herald, The Age and The West Australian also covered it; we only receive their summaries, so their writing is not scored here.

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ABC News 94.3

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The same event elsewhere

6 outlets from 3 newsrooms reported this story: the one you are reading and the other 5 below. The table above compares the reports we could score.

Brisbane Times Troop carrier fleet use paused following death of young solider summary only, not scored The Sydney Morning Herald Troop carrier fleet use paused following death of young solider summary only, not scored The Age Troop carrier fleet use paused following death of young solider summary only, not scored The West Australian Army pauses use of vehicle involved in training death summary only, not scored ABC News Use of Supacat paused as army chief reveals soldier killed was not at wheel Niral 94.3 · calm writing political 0