The bodies of the pair were recovered from the vehicle after the crash on the Fraser Coast.
Queensland
Woman and young girl found dead in SUV crashed into dam
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How outlets headlined it
Each outlet's own headline.
- Brisbane Times Woman and young girl found dead in SUV crashed into dam
- The West Australian Woman and young girl found dead in car after crashing into dam on Fraser Coast
- ABC News Woman, child found dead in car in dam
A summary of Brisbane Times’s report.
How calmly each outlet wrote it
The West Australian, The Age, WAtoday and The Sydney Morning Herald also covered it; we only receive their summaries, so their writing is not scored here.
| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| Brisbane Timesas they published this story | Not scored: we only receive a 34-word summary of this report. |
| ABC News | 91.7 |
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The same event elsewhere
6 outlets from 3 newsrooms reported this story: the one you are reading and the other 5 below. The table above compares the reports we could score.
The West Australian
Woman and young girl found dead in car after crashing into dam on Fraser Coast
summary only, not scored
The Age
Woman and young girl found dead in SUV crashed into dam
summary only, not scored
WAtoday
Woman and young girl found dead in SUV crashed into dam
summary only, not scored
The Sydney Morning Herald
Woman and young girl found dead in SUV crashed into dam
summary only, not scored
ABC News
Woman, child found dead in car in dam
Niral 91.7 · calm writing
political 0