The bodies of the pair were recovered from the vehicle after the crash on the Fraser Coast.
Queensland
Woman and young girl found dead in SUV crashed into dam
From the report
How outlets headlined it
Each outlet's own headline.
- The Sydney Morning Herald Woman and young girl found dead in SUV crashed into dam
- ABC News Woman, child found dead in car in dam
A summary of The Sydney Morning Herald’s report.
How calmly each outlet wrote it
The Age, WAtoday and Brisbane Times also covered it; we only receive their summaries, so their writing is not scored here.
| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| The Sydney Morning Heraldas they published this story | Not scored: we only receive a 34-word summary of this report. |
| ABC News | 91.7 |
How did this read?
Sign in to react.
Comments
Comments are not open yet. They will be once there is someone to read every one before it appears. If something here is wrong, tell us — that we do read.
Report a problem with these scores or this rewrite — it goes straight into the public ledger.
The same event elsewhere
5 outlets from 2 newsrooms reported this story: the one you are reading and the other 4 below. The table above compares the reports we could score.
The Age
Woman and young girl found dead in SUV crashed into dam
summary only, not scored
WAtoday
Woman and young girl found dead in SUV crashed into dam
summary only, not scored
Brisbane Times
Woman and young girl found dead in SUV crashed into dam
summary only, not scored
ABC News
Woman, child found dead in car in dam
Niral 91.7 · calm writing
political 0